neverm0re's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bill&Jeff Series Trailer]

Wasn't that great

It didn't do anything to hype up this new series. I didn't find it funny, sorry. The animation was drawn well, i'll give you that.

["Waterman" Ep. V]

Was alright

I found it entertaining, but not all that funny. The only part where I found it amusing was the beginning of the kill bill spoof. Then it kinda dragged on. It seems that at times it's too wacky and therefore makes it a sort of stupid comedy thing like ren & stimpy. I think what your trying to aim for is a more family guy/simpsons smart comedy. I can't really tell you how to make it better, maybe try to find someone who has some funnier ideas.

[SystemProject Final Piece]

bleh

This i'm afraid is not college animation material. Nearly everyone here can do motion tweens like that, that's all this was. It didn't show anything that was frame by frame motion. Very unsteady too. The only thing that was reasonable were the drawings.

ess-jay-arr responds:

I'm on an Art Foundation course... there's absolutely no animation in the curriculum, none of my teachers know anything about it. I've taught myself this much from scratch. Also, my timescale really didn't allow for frame-by-frame, that's why I used tweening.

These things considered, I - and twenty-odd other reviewers - think I've done quite well. Thanks for the review, I suppose.

[Nihil ep1: inquisitor]

Good

A bit confusing, but the action was great. Seemed to get all over the place at times. I wish you would have added sound effects instead of music throughout the entire thing. I like the main characters design, very different, hair on one side and his thin skeletal look is very effective. Keep it up

[Saravyu (premiere)]

ugh

Music quality was extremely poor, I don't mean the song, the 'quality' of it. But anyways, your still drawing was fine, the movement was terrible though. Just an easy way out in not doing some hard detailing and movement. If you are just gonna use kidna of a shadow look, It can be done better with noticable figures. I could hardly tell what was going on. When you get to creating the actually movie, try to make things easier to notice or you'll have your viewers watching black blobs fly around.

[Whitmore the Toad Pirate2]

Nice Job

You know what made this funny? It was different. Keep at it!

EdibleCastle responds:

thank you. will do, whitmore will appear in one more movie of 3 episodes

[Star Wars - V.U.S.]

meh

The thing that bugged me was the way the animation moved. It was terrible.. I don't mean just the movement, but the way the character would move their arm or walk. The voice acting was pretty bad too. Drawings were alright, but you really gotta check out to see how things move. Also hated darth's mouth piece moving when he talked. Other than that, keep at it.

[History Of Megaman Part I]

boring

Simply put, I found myself having more fun picking my nose.
Boring everything
Mixed all kinds of Mega Man media together.. touchy..
Sound was just dull
What's with the swearing? I constantly see animations with mega man characters swearing, since when do they swear!! Trying to make them look tough or something? Maybe know one knows how to spell anymore... replacing words like 'the' with 'shit'?
Sorry man, better luck next time.

[BATMAN]

heh

T-e-r-r-i-b-l-e I mean sure the animation was ok, but it went no where. Just some guys getting knocked out by batman and robin. No sound effects, same music playing. Dull... Then at the end "BATMAN"
and... I waited there in shock to see more, but it didn't come, so I cried many tears. I wasted my time... Sorry bud, just didn't see anything in this.

[Shorts Mix]

bah

It was trash.. That's it..